His Space
Blue
Up high
In His sky
Colors His peace
Hatred seems to cease
On earth for a short
while
A heart shines happy
with smile
Deep blue depth shows
people His love
Lasting promise shared
words from above
Come see His sky and
what His world shall be
- Rhoda Galgiani
Count Up Form of Poetry - This
titled form consists of exactly ten lines
The first line
having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable,
with a total count of fifty-five syllables - This form allows both rhyme and
meter, while it’s similar cousin ETHEREE allows neither...rg
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Amen Rhoda! What a wonderful faith message in your poem. Keep your inspiration shining.
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Thank you Karen for your 'again' supportive comment. It is always nice hearing from you. Happy you enjoyed this poetry form...rg
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