Lifetime of
Treasures
Memories
tonight tuck scenes away
As one’s
mind is in slumbers rest
Thoughts
hidden deeply inside
Mind’s
sweet memory box
Lifetime of
treasures
With bright
vision
Captured
scene
Preserved
Moments
Stay
Stay
Moments
Preserved
Captured
scene
With bright
vision
Lifetime of
treasures
Mind’s
sweet memory box
Thoughts
hidden deeply inside
As one’s
mind is in slumbers rest
Memory
tonight tuck scenes away
- Rhoda Galgiani
X Factor style - Created by Erich J. Goller 11/12/2011
20 lines - the first 10 lines 9/8/7/6/5/4/3/2/2/1 syllables
Second 10 lines reversed first 10 lines - 1/2/2/3/4 5/6/7/8/9 syllable
Rhyming - line 1 and line 10 and line 11 and 20 - any subject
20 lines - the first 10 lines 9/8/7/6/5/4/3/2/2/1 syllables
Second 10 lines reversed first 10 lines - 1/2/2/3/4 5/6/7/8/9 syllable
Rhyming - line 1 and line 10 and line 11 and 20 - any subject
Love this one Rhoda. So much meaning tucked into this artistic poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you Karen for the visit. I really enjoyed posting this poetry - a delightful form to work with...rg
ReplyDeleteRhoda, what form of poem is this? I like it when you add the type. it is so much fun to see the different styles you use to express yourself. A wonderful talent you have.
ReplyDeletegreat content within this one.. and of course.. Perfection with the style too... well enjyed! God bless love Tina
ReplyDeleteThank you Charlene and Tina for the comment. I think this will be a great addition to the site adding the explanation of the poetry form...rg
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