A Women Scorn
Conceals the pure love
that once did glow
Afraid to reveal pain
the heart does show
Broken with slashes
deep trying to hide
Body mends the mind
closed the gap so wide
Love has taken the soul
far below
Buries the guilt so his
hand cannot sow
Heart crying deep
tears as true love has died
Steals ones mind and
thoughts not to restore
His lying lips she’s now
a woman scorn
Emotions wasted on
visions now torn
Walks alone to regain
life as was born
Brings hope to a women
who is lovelorn
- Rhoda Galgiani
The Sonnet Form of Poetry consisting of an octave
with the rhyme pattern abbaabba
followed by six lines with a rhyme pattern of cdecde or cdcdcd...rg
followed by six lines with a rhyme pattern of cdecde or cdcdcd...rg
I loved your sonnet. I could feel the forlornness of the woman who was scorned. So sad and yet it ends in hope. I liked this Rhoda. Thank you for your wonderful talent for evoking emotion and memories with your words.
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Wonderful message from you Charlene. Maybe we all have been a 'Woman Scorn' at one time or another. Hmmm, maybe that is why I am single and can write about it...rg
ReplyDeleteVery informative and uplifting sonnet, Rhoda. I really like literary material like this. There are a lot who shy away from areas like this, but I am glad you have the boldness and flavor to speak about it. Continued blessings.
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Maurice - thank you for your honest opinion. I don't post too much poetry with this type of subject matter, but on occasion I will. This is life - and I believe it is not what one says, it is how one says it. There are many woman (and men) jilted, scorn and such - if my words can give one hope for a new outlook and yes, even a new beginning - then write it I will for they are not alone. My heart thanks you...rg
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