March 27, 2014

Lanterne...


Rain
Downpour
Earth swallows
Mother Nature's
Tears

- Rhoda Galgiani

Lanterne Poetry Form has 5 lines 1, 2, 3, 4 Syllables
Last word 1 Syllable relating to first word


6 comments:

Charlene McCutcheon said...

What a beautiful Lanterne poem. I love it. You did a great job on this one as you do on all your poems.
Love, Charlene

Rhoda Galgiani said...

Hi Charlene - I like working with the Lanterne Poetry Form. Short, simple and to the point. Thanks for stopping by and for the read...rg

Maurice Reynolds said...

Beautiful. Short and power-packed full of nature's expressions from the pen of a blessed poet. Thank you for sharing. -MJ

Rhoda Galgiani said...

Words that come from you Maurice are a blessing. My heart thanks you for your uplifting support...rg

S. Stefanowich said...

Dear Rhoda,

This is a beautifully written Lanterne in so few words. I enjoyed reading this poem this afternoon as it is very uplifting as well. Keep up the great writing!

Love Sandra

Rhoda Galgiani said...

I love Mother Nature Sandra except for her wind. Been difficult writing about our forth coming Spring as Winter is still on everyone's mind!!! It was sooooo long this year. Happy you enjoyed my Lanterne - thanks for the visit...rg