November 11, 2013

Nine, Eight, Nine Poetry Style...


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Words of wisdom come to those who wait
those who long to fill knowledge plate
broaden their mind in the starting gate

Patience learned with time - times a teacher
patient one is a good preacher
rewards far outweigh for this creature

Light gives to one for their brightest day
turns dark thought to a positive way
directs ones path from dark dreams of grey

Love brings her joy to an open heart
shows one the way to peace from start
giving those who wait - their wisdom chart

- Rhoda Galgiani

Nine, Eight, Nine Poetry Style - Created by Rhoda Galgiani
Four verses, 3 lines each with syllable count of 9, 8, 9!
Rhyme aaa, bbb, ccc, ddd - Subject - Something taught…rg

5 comments:

Karen O'Leary said...

Dear Rhoda,

You sure have shared some wisdom here. You sure are a light for others. So glad the comments box showed up again. Love leaving comments for you my friend. You are such a talented writer.

Love,
Karen

Rhoda Galgiani said...

Awww Karen - you are such a wonderful supporter. Thank you so much for this wonderful, supportive comment...rg

Karen O'Leary said...

So glad to leave it my friend. Glad that this is working again.

Love,
Karen

Charlene McCutcheon said...

Love it that you can add pictures with your poems. I loved your wisdom in this poem and it touched my heart. You have such wonderful talent and I think it is great that you are still putting the type of poem it is at the bottom of each poem. It gives me encouragement to try the same. I am so glad I can leave not only comments but check the comments boxes

Rhoda Galgiani said...

Thank you Charlene for your lovely comment. Upon turning the page on my website from pictures of animals and poetry, it give me great pleasure to present poetry forms to my readers. Who knows, there might be a budding poet out there just waiting to get their ink flowing in the world of poetry...rg