For Tomorrow
Sensation penetrates
the troubled mind
as if to sooth, to
comfort the turmoil of
conflict that came
before the darkened brow
Life of confidence, of one’s
serenity is
shattered just for the
moment at hand
a moment that is taken
for granted in life
Ray of light shows a
stumble is one’s road
bringing one to their
knees just for an instant
not forever as the saddened
mind would suggest
Life has its woes that
brings one to shed tears
something tells the
dark heart not to worry
God’s there to wash one
clean for tomorrow
- Rhoda Galgiani
Free Verse Poetry Form has no rhyme, no special line
length or no special pattern. It sounds like natural speech. It tells a story
or paints a picture. It uses carefully chosen words to describe experiences or
feelings. It is written like a poem and not like a paragraph. It must make
sense to the reader…rg
So glad you're still around. and I love this poem. I really appreciate your free style as well as your explanation of what free style is. It appears you have had some rough moments in life and know just how to resolve them with trust in the Lord. Good Job Rodha.
ReplyDeleteThank you Charlene for the supportive comment.
ReplyDeleteYes, God shows us the way if we
take the time to listen to Him.
Thank you again for your support...rg
Tears will be shed and sorrow felt, but memories will surface of the love you have shared.... Blessings to you.... love Tina
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem Rhoda with a good message. I see others were impressed with it too. Thank you for sharing your words with us.
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Thank you Christina and Karen for the visit and comments. Your messages mean a lot to me...rg
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