I take a breath and He
Purifies my soul.
He protects me,
I stumble and fall
He catches my spirit.
He comforts me,
Wrapping a gift around
My heart and mind.
He loves me,
Telling me so with His
Every heavenly word.
Us!
He and Me,
God, my Father -
Amen.
Fourth Place Honorable Mention
Poem of Faith Poetry Contest
PoetrySoup.com ~ June 15, 2010
Beautiful comments I have received from my PoetrySoup friends...
ReplyDeleteKaren O'Leary Date: 6/15/2010 11:44:00 AM Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor my friend. Wishing you many more. Karen
Carolyn Henderson Date: 6/15/2010 7:12:00 AM A beautiful testament of your faith. Congratulations on your winning entry in Brian's contest...Carolyn
Charles Henderson Date: 6/10/2010 9:12:00 PM Very nicely done RG. I talk to him every day constantly. My friend, my protector, my God. Charles
James Marshall Goff Date: 6/10/2010 7:41:00 PM a fine prayer, Rhoda! and I agree...jimbo
Karen O'Leary Date: 6/10/2010 6:17:00 PM Another uplifting poem from your pen. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my blog. Karen
Carolyn Henderson Date: 6/10/2010 1:52:00 PM A beautiful poem of faith. Very much enjoyed. And thank you for your words of comfort a few days ago on the passing of my only sister. It is truly a blessing to share the joys of friendship of unknown faces, yet bound by beautiful words of poetry written from the heart. Appreciate your kindness..... Carolyn
Linda-Marie Bariana Date: 6/9/2010 1:14:00 PM A beautiful faith poem Rhoda and good luck in Brian's contest.. a joy and prayer all in itself..my sweet friend.. luv your blog today too.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Carol Brown Date: 6/9/2010 10:22:00 AM Absolutely amazing Rhoda. It is wonderful to see you back here posting again. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
__ (A Rambling Poet) Date: 6/9/2010 8:52:00 AM Rhoda, I think this poem is really beautiful. a true poem of faith. Best of luck in the contest. It rates a 7 for me. Love Constance
Carrie Richards Date: 6/9/2010 7:58:00 AM Sincere and meaningful words of faith, Rhoda. Lovely poem!! Best wishes in Brian's contest! Love, Carrie
Brian Strand Date: 6/9/2010 7:48:00 AM Thak you for supporting my contest Rhoda.Rgds Brian
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/9/2010 6:54:00 AM Thanks for your comments on my etheree. Good luck in the contest.